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[Essay/영작] (토플-053) Is the most important aspect of a job the money a person earns?
최고관리자  |  19-08-06 10:03
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job 
is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (전문보기)

Opinion Type: 직업의 가장 중요한 측면의 버는 돈이다. 찬성/반대?

⓵ 주제문 -> One aspect that all adults have in common is employment. Regardless of the field, adults 
pursue career goals and have a variety of motivations in doing so.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, personal satisfaction is more important than money. 
If people were only concerned with money, their life would be extremely unsatisfying. 

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, people look upon their job as a method of contributing towards society. 
Many people are concerned with factors other than money. 

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In short, while every adult works, not everyone is concerned with monetary gain.