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[Essay/영작] (토플-060) Are games as important for adults as they are for children?
최고관리자  |  19-12-10 22:50
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 
Games are as important for adults as they are for children. 
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (전문보기)

Opinion Type: 게임은 아이들에게 중요한 것만큼 어른들에게도 중요하다.

⓵ 주제문 -> Adults spend a lot of their time working to improve their lives and the lives of their families.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> Modern society is hectic for adults; thus, playing games will help with a person’s mental health.

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Furthermore, adults will be able to maintain good relationships with friends and families if they play games.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> It is not easy to get along in society sometimes, so I believe that adults need to take time to play games.