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[Essay/영작] (토플-066) Are classmates a more important influence than parents on child?
최고관리자  |  20-02-10 23:37
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 
Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. 
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (전문보기)

Opinion Type: 학교에서 아이의 성공에 급우(반 친구)가 부모님보다 더 중요한 영향을 준다.

⓵ 주제문 -> There is a debate concerning the education of children.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> To begin with, classmates tend to have a lot in common, so they are able to give each other useful advice. 

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> In addition, seeing as they are together most of the day, classmates are available to help each other.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, there are many different people that have an influence on the lives of children, 
but for success in school classmates have the more important influence.