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[Essay/영작] (토플-070) Has the automobile improved modern life?
최고관리자 | 20-03-09 10:11
Some people that the automobile has improved modern life.
Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems.
What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (전문보기)
Comparison Type: 자동차는 현대 생활을 향상 시켰다 "vs" 심각한 문제를 야기했다
⓵ 주제문 -> There have been numerous advancements in nearly every aspect of society over the past century.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, automobiles are a significant source of air pollution. When cars were first manufactured,
few people thought of the negative aspects associated with them.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, the increased use of automobiles has led to thousands of deaths annually in the US alone.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In short, it is true that automobiles have provided people with added convenience
by helping them save time and travel long distances, but the negative aspects such as air pollution and
traffic accidents far outweigh any advantages.
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