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[Essay/영작] (토플-101) Which do you prefer: work by hand vs. by using machine
최고관리자  |  21-02-24 06:42
Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. 
Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (전문보기)

Comparison Type: (기계가 아닌) 사람 손으로 "vs" 기계를 사용

⓵ 주제문 -> There seems to be two ways of doing work.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> One advantage of using machines is that machines help me save a lot of time.

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Another important advantage of using machines is that machines enable me to save effort.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, in some cases, doing work by hand may provide additional accuracy and 
better results, but for chores people do around the house, machines are a definite advantage.