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[Essay/영작] (토플-023) Do you support the idea of teens having jobs as students?
최고관리자  |  18-05-17 10:37
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? 
Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. (전문보기)

Description Type: 십대(청소년) 학생들의 직업을 갖는것에 대한 생각은?

⓵ 주제문 -> One side of the fence argues against teenagers having jobs and the other side argues in favor of 
them being able to work if they want to. 

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> Overwhelmingly, the number one thing for students to focus on before their university years 
is studying. 

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Furthermore, the teenage years are an important time in a young life because at this time 
they are also developing social skills, another important aspect of adult life. 

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, I believe that it is imperative that students spend their free time during their 
teenage years pursuing the goals that will enable them to become well-rounded adults.