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[Essay/영작] (토플-006) What would you change one thing about your hometown?
최고관리자 | 17-01-30 10:47
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change?
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. (전문보기)
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. (전문보기)
Comparison Type: 당신의 고향을 바꿀 수 있다면 무엇을 바꾸겠습니까?
⓵ 주제문 -> If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be air pollution problem,
and I will give the following reasons to explain why I want to solve the problem.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> The first and most important reason is that I hope that my hometown can become a beautiful city.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Another reason why I want to change my hometown's air pollution situation is
that the city's development needs clean and tidy environment to attract investors.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In my mind, changing air pollution will apparently be my first choice if I can change
one important thing about my hometown.
⓵ 주제문 -> If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be air pollution problem,
and I will give the following reasons to explain why I want to solve the problem.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> The first and most important reason is that I hope that my hometown can become a beautiful city.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Another reason why I want to change my hometown's air pollution situation is
that the city's development needs clean and tidy environment to attract investors.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In my mind, changing air pollution will apparently be my first choice if I can change
one important thing about my hometown.
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