
It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. (전문보기)
Opinion Type: 아이들은 어디에서 사는게 더 나은가요? 시골 vs 도시
⓵ 주제문 -> I believe that growing up in a big city provides children with more advantages than in the countryside.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> Living in a big city almost guarantees children a better chance of receiving a better education
than in the countryside.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> In addition to a better variety of educational opportunities, children can learn through more
cultural experiences when growing up in a big city.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> To conclude, while the countryside surely provides benefits such as cleaner air, less noise and
a calmer lifestyle, the benefits of living in a big city far outweigh those of living in the countryside.