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[Essay/영작] (토플-032) Which do you prefer: enjoying money vs. saving money for the future
최고관리자 | 19-02-13 20:55
Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or
is it better to save your money for some time in the future?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. (전문보기)
Comparison Type: 미래를 위해 돈을 저축 vs 돈을 벌때 사용
⓵ 주제문 -> The primary goal for most people when they become adults is to get a job and earn money.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First of all, it is a good idea to save money for a rainy day.
Unexpected events can happen at any time, and you may need money immediately.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> In addition, saving money instead of just spending it teaches us the importance of discipline.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> While it is good to enjoy money made from working hard, it is important not to spend your entire paycheck.
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