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[Essay/영작] (토플-034) Should businesses hire employees for their entire lives?
최고관리자  |  19-03-03 02:24
Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? 
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (전문보기)

Opinion Type: 고용인들은 평생 고용이 보장되어야 한다. 찬성/반대?

⓵ 주제문 -> The length of time an employee is hired for is a matter of some debate.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, employees with lifetime employment contracts would be unable to advance within the company.

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, businesses hiring employees for life would no longer be competitive.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, I believe that employees hired for their entire lives would be a serious disadvantage 
to both the business and the employee.