People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work?
Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples & details to support your answer. (전문보기)
Description Type: 돈을 떠나서 사람들이 일하는 이유
⓵ 주제문 -> When talking about working, some people always complain a lot about it.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> In the first place, we work to practice our skills and we have to learn many aspects of
knowledge to solve the problems and to overcome difficulties.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> In the second place, we work to realize our value by producing large amount of goods and serving the others.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In addition , we work to keep us healthy. We can communicate with each other during work.