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[Essay/영작] (토플-050) Which do you prefer: try new things vs. do only what you already do well
최고관리자  |  19-07-10 10:27
Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things & take risks. 
Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (전문보기)

Comparison Type: 새로운 일 vs 익숙한 일

⓵ 주제문 -> Different people have different personalities in that there are those that seek new challenges & those who prefer security.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First of all, trying new things enables me to make beneficial changes in my life. 

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Moreover, I like to try new things and take risks because it makes life more interesting.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, while there are some merits involved in not trying new things or taking risks, 
such as comfort and security, I prefer to try new and risky things instead of just sticking to what I already know.