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[Essay/영작] (토플-064) Would you rather be self-employed or work for someone else?
최고관리자  |  20-01-22 23:58
Some people to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. 
Would you rather be self-employed or work for someone else? 
Use specific reasons to explain your choice. (전문보기)

Comparison Type: 삶의 힘들고 어려운 경험은 미래에 소중한 교훈이 된다.

⓵ 주제문 -> Many people have a variety of goals and personal preferences when it comes to employment.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, being self-employed allows people an incredible amount of flexibility.

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, being self-employed allows people to focus entirely on achieving their own goals. 

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In short, people have a wide variety of employment preferences.