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[Essay/영작] (토플-087) What discovery has been most beneficial for people in your country?
최고관리자  |  20-07-09 01:38
What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? 
Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. (전문보기)

Description Type: 지난 100년간 당신의 나라에 가장 유익했던 발견은? 

⓵ 주제문 -> I think the most important discovery that has been the most beneficial for people 
in my country is the invention of Internet. 

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> The Internet can be used as a broad base of knowledge that contributes to 
the educational system.

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Internet can deliver better customer services to people. 
The Internet is changing the way we do business.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> The Internet today is a way to transfer and share information. 
On the whole, it is a benefit to individuals of all kinds.