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[Essay/영작] (토플-097) Should teachers be paid according to how much their students learn?
최고관리자  |  20-10-01 07:13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 
Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. 
Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. (전문보기)

Opinion Type: 선생님들은 학생이 얼만큼 배우냐에 따라 돈을 받아야 한다. 

⓵ 주제문 -> These days, there are some debates among educators about whether or not teachers 
should be paid according to how much their students learn.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First of all, different teachers have different styles of instructing, so it is difficult 
to evaluate how well each teacher teaches according to how much students learn. 

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Moreover, a teacher is not the only component of education. 
How much or how well students learn also depends on students themselves.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, there are many factors that influence education.