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[Essay/영작] (토플-104) Which type of contribution is more valued by society: artists vs. scientists
최고관리자  |  21-04-05 03:26
It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. 
Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. 
Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by your society? 
Give specific reasons to support your answer. (전문보기)

Comparison Type: 누가 사회에 더 기여하는가? 예술가 vs 과학자

⓵ 주제문 -> Everyone contributes to society in a variety of ways.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, artists provide entertainment. After a long day at work or school, 
people need time to relax and relieve the stress that built up during the day.

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, artists greatly influence the culture or a society. Great parts of modern life are 
influenced by the artists of our times, regardless of whether people know them by name or not.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, I believe that artists contribute to society more than scientists 
because of the nature and influence of their contributions.