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[Essay/영작] (토플-007) How do movies or television influence people's behavior?
최고관리자  |  17-02-10 08:49
How do movies or television influence people's behavior? 
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 
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 주제문 -> I believe that movies and television do influence our behavior, both for the better and for the worse. 

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 뒷받침 문장 1 -> Movies and television influence our behavior because they make us less active. 
Looking at films is a passive activity. If we watch too much, we become unhealthy, both mentally and physically.

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 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Movies and television also can make people more violent. The more we see violent acts 
on television, the less sensitive we become to them: Eventually violence doesn't seem wrong.

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 마무리 문장 -> It is true that movies and television can influence our behavior negatively. 
However, I also believe that they influence our behavior in positive ways.