[Essay/영작] (토플-007) How do movies or television influence people's behavior?
최고관리자 | 17-02-10 08:49

How do movies or television influence people's behavior?
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. (전문보기)
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⓵ 주제문 -> I believe that movies and television do influence our behavior, both for the better and for the worse.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> Movies and television influence our behavior because they make us less active.
Looking at films is a passive activity. If we watch too much, we become unhealthy, both mentally and physically.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Movies and television also can make people more violent. The more we see violent acts
on television, the less sensitive we become to them: Eventually violence doesn't seem wrong.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> It is true that movies and television can influence our behavior negatively.
However, I also believe that they influence our behavior in positive ways.