It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. (Àü¹®º¸±â)
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⓵ ÁÖÁ¦¹® -> I believe that growing up in a big city provides children with more advantages than in the countryside.
⓶ µÞ¹Þħ ¹®Àå 1 -> Living in a big city almost guarantees children a better chance of receiving a better education
than in the countryside.
⓷ µÞ¹Þħ ¹®Àå 2 -> In addition to a better variety of educational opportunities, children can learn through more
cultural experiences when growing up in a big city.
⓸ ¸¶¹«¸® ¹®Àå -> To conclude, while the countryside surely provides benefits such as cleaner air, less noise and
a calmer lifestyle, the benefits of living in a big city far outweigh those of living in the countryside.