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[Essay/영작] (토플-021) Why are people living longer now?
최고관리자 | 18-01-14 11:31
In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. (전문보기)
Description Type: 사람들이 더 오래 사는 이유는?
⓵ 주제문 -> With the development of human society, people are living longer now.
Many factors interacting together enable the longer life.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> The improving quality of our food is the most important factor of the longer life.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Furthermore, governments are paying more and more money on medical establishments.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> To sum up, the development of our society causes the longer life of people.
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