⓵ 주제문 -> As the population continues to grow in communities surrounding my own, business have made
a variety of proposals to take advantage of the continuous influx of people.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, being able to do all of my shopping at once is a huge convenience.
Since my community has gotten progressively larger, I've always had to travel all over town to get everything I need.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, a large shopping center would help develop the local economy.
A shopping center regularly people from all the communities within driving distance.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In short, a large shopping center in my area would bring numerous advantages.