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[Essay/영작] (토플-071) Which would you choose: a high paying job with long hours vs. a lower-paying job with shorter hours
최고관리자 | 20-03-11 23:26
Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time
with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time
with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details. (전문보기)
Comparison Type: 보수가 많지만 적은 여유 시간 "vs" 보수는 적지만 더 많은 여유 시간
⓵ 주제문 -> Some people may prefer to have a lower-paying job as long as the job asks for
shorter working hours so they can have more free time spending with their friends and family.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> I really care about the money because my budget is too tight nowadays.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> My friends and my family members are all very busy all day long.
Some of them are busy in working; others are busy in studying.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> I would like to have a higher-paying job to support myself and earn enough money
to meet my busy friends and family someday later.
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