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[Essay/영작] (토플-078) Is it more important to work together or independently?
최고관리자  |  20-05-05 07:42
Is it more important to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? 
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. (전문보기)

Description Type: 어는 것이 더 중요한가요? 독립적으로 일하는 것 "vs" 그룹과 함께 일하는 것

⓵ 주제문 -> It is a fact that after becoming adults we have to go to work in order to make money. 

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First of all, you can produce a high quality of work when working with others.

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> In addition, it is necessary for people today to be able to function in a group.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> To sum up, while there are still careers where people can do better on their own than in a group, 
the majority of businesses require a team functioning like a well-oiled machine.