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[Essay/¿µÀÛ] (ÅäÇÃ-081) Has technology made the world a better place to live?
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world 
a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. (Àü¹®º¸±â)

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 ÁÖÁ¦¹® -> Many aspects of the world are both good and bad and are constantly changing, change that 
can commonly be attributed to technology.

 µÞ¹Þħ ¹®Àå 1 -> First, technological advancements have life more convenient. 

 µÞ¹Þħ ¹®Àå 2 -> Second, developments in medical technology have allowed people to live longer, healthier lives.

 ¸¶¹«¸® ¹®Àå -> In conclusion, many people focus on the disadvantages and problems associated with technology, 
but I believe that the benefits far outweigh the negative aspects.